Ooh, wow. This was nice. Very, very interesting from a psychological perspective. Your writing is also quite fitting for this fic, and it was especially noticeable when there was a shift in narrative style when Gabriel was drugged. I enjoyed this fic so much, although it was quite painful to read all the torture Gabriel was going through, but the honest, brutal way you handled it made it all the more intriguing of a read.
Thank you so much for sharing! I'm thrilled to see that you're considering a sequel-- I'd very much love to read a continuation.
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Date: 2011-11-01 08:09 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for sharing! I'm thrilled to see that you're considering a sequel-- I'd very much love to read a continuation.